Nick Neveu- “Seafood Gumbo”
Snuggled in blankets, too cold to wake up, then I smell the gumbo. Ever since I was a child in Louisiana, I always loved waking up to the strong smell of seafood gumbo. My mother would only cook it when it was cold outside because she said it warmed the soul with our ancestors. Seafood gumbo has been in my family as far back as I can trace it. Gumbo originated in Louisiana and can be found in the southern United States up through the Carolinas. It is a stew or soup that is very rich and dark with many variations. My favorite thing about gumbo is that there are never two just alike dishes no matter how many times you eat it. My family is strictly Cajun and therefore never uses tomatoes like classic Creole cooking but instead a dark roux. Inside this truly Louisiana dish, there are many options for the meat or main filler. My favorite being the seafood style but I also enjoy chicken, sausage, and smoked pork. Next goes in the holy trinity to Cajuns, bell pepper, celery, and onion. After cooked all day, you drown rice with the wonderful concoction and prepare for a feast. This can be a meal entirely by itself but nothing taste better than a side of momma’s potato salad. Another side dish popular in New Orleans is French bread for dipping or sweet potatoes.
Snuggled in blankets, too cold to wake up, then I smell the gumbo. Ever since I was a child in Louisiana, I always loved waking up to the strong smell of seafood gumbo. My mother would only cook it when it was cold outside because she said it warmed the soul with our ancestors. Seafood gumbo has been in my family as far back as I can trace it. Gumbo originated in Louisiana and can be found in the southern United States up through the Carolinas. It is a stew or soup that is very rich and dark with many variations. My favorite thing about gumbo is that there are never two just alike dishes no matter how many times you eat it. My family is strictly Cajun and therefore never uses tomatoes like classic Creole cooking but instead a dark roux. Inside this truly Louisiana dish, there are many options for the meat or main filler. My favorite being the seafood style but I also enjoy chicken, sausage, and smoked pork. Next goes in the holy trinity to Cajuns, bell pepper, celery, and onion. After cooked all day, you drown rice with the wonderful concoction and prepare for a feast. This can be a meal entirely by itself but nothing taste better than a side of momma’s potato salad. Another side dish popular in New Orleans is French bread for dipping or sweet potatoes.
When hungry and ready for the gumbo to be served, the anticipation of eating the dish lingers throughout the whole house until finally lunch time arrives. My mother’s sacrifice of waking up at six will soon be worth every second of sleep missed. I enjoy my seafood gumbo slow at first, or at least I try. I like to take a bite of rice and try to get pieces of each sea creature on my spoon. I soon find it impossible with the shrimp, crawfish, crab, oysters, and bits of lobster not willing to all be stacked at once. I settle with the jumbo shrimp. After a few more mind blowing bites its time to try the potato salad. One bite scooped on the spoon and dunked into the dark, soupy mixture then engulfed. This is where the adventure begins. Praying that when you dunk, you have a seabit stuck to the side of the potato salad. My luck prevails this time!
To me, seafood gumbo is the one true meal for my family and its legacy. Perfected over many generations of Neveus, it is now a masterpiece that can be passed down without further correction. Whenever I eat it, I think about my homeland and all the activities that go with it. Every Cajun member of my family loves the outdoors and is addicted to golfing and fishing. If I close my eyes when taking a big bite I am immediately transported to my grandpa’s fishing boat or my uncle’s golf cart at the Abbeville Country Club. My 84 year old great grandma has many stories of gumbo in her past. She always tells her grandkids of her and her father going to “da crawfish pand” to get her seafood the freshest way they knew how. One tradition still rich in Cajun parts of Louisiana is the famous gumbo parties. A gumbo party is when all your friends get together with a different style of gumbo cooked and everyone participate to judge the entries. Usually these parties are during big events such as a football game or around mardi gras and they are always a great time for family and friends to get together and enjoy terrific food. One of these parties particularly sticks out in my mind. My grandpa and I went fishing the day before the sacred event and we caught over twenty trout. The next day I helped him prepare our rendition of the classic seafood gumbo before the party. After all the judging from our friends and family it was clear that we were the champions. When my grandpa heard the news he announced to everyone “Shoot, Nick caught all the fish, all I did was make the sauce!”
When I go to a restaurant and see GUMBO on the menu I first hesitate before ordering. I know that even though it will be wonderful, it will not be as delicious as my family’s. I have had other variations that taste almost as dark and rich as my mothers but lack the authenticity. You may have too little or too much rice that can kill the mood of the gumbo or just not enough spice. Although some may seem displeasing, I almost always order the crazy combinations. Alligator, rabbit, and duck with oysters are only some of the few you can find in New Orleans that will surely make you leave with a crooked smile on your face.
All throughout Louisiana, French-Americans were assimilated into the United States of America just like each aspect of the gumbo is cooked together in one stew. Each seafood represents a different culture all cooked together to create one delicious product, the United States. When my distant ancestors came to the U.S. we had tradition, pride, and a different last name. A fellow Cajun priest changed the name of my great, great grandfather from Neveaux to Neveu. Gumbo can also be related to this by the changing of its ingredients over time to better suit the county and area it is eaten in.
In conclusion, gumbo is my heritage, youth, and absolute favorite thing to eat. It is a truly changing and developing dish cooked in the bayou and brought to the U.S. kitchens. When it gets cold again I can go to sleep anxious and snuggled in blankets hoping that in the morning I will be awaken by the powerful, always delightful scent of seafood gumbo.
2 comments:
Hey Nick! I like your food narrative in the sense that it shows me your deep Cajun ancestry. You illustrated the idea of Cajun traditions or characteristics with you and your family quite a few times in your paper. Anyone can read this paper and see your love, and connection, to gumbo. That’s good, but the main thing you need to work on is structure and clarity. Go back and organize this paper so that each idea transitions into the next. You have great ideas and they show how gumbo is specifically unique to you…but the paper simply sounds choppy. This choppiness is apparent when you skip from one idea to the next. Somehow, tie each instance of gumbo into you main idea—the thesis. Also, when revising, fix some of the errors with misplaced modifiers, subject-verb agreement, and sentence style. This paper really just needs to be proofread. When minor errors are present, they can make the difference between a paper that is understood or NOT understood. That’s all. Enjoyed reading it though.
Nick, i really enjoyed reading your essay. It really made me believe that this dish is your favorite. I loved how you talked to a lot about your Cajun traditions and how much this meal really means to you. You did a great job describing what exactly it was becasue I had no idea what gumbo was. In a narrative, description is the key factor and you really did a great job on that. I do belive that your essay was kind of all over the place in a sense that their was no connection from each paragraph and story you told. It was choppy and I believe that if you were to make it flow a little better than it would be an amazing paper.
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