Courtney Hamilton
Adam Weinstein
En 101
12/6/07

Revision of Live From Iraq: The Gruesome Truth

According to the first lines in the song Live From Iraq, “ Every days like a gamble here, This is no joke, This is live from Iraq, Where we prayin we make it home”, the song illustrates the hardships American soldiers must face everyday in the war with Iraq. Every line provides detailed proof that the war is not what is advertised on television in the United States. This song illustrates the true blood and gore endured by the soldiers that is censored from the television sets of every American. Live From Iraq offers the inside scoop of a gruesome war without the government’s distorted view point. In order to understand the full concept of the war with Iraq, the viewpoint of an actual soldier is necessary. Live From Iraq uses pathos to evoke emotions in the reader in order to persuade the audience to disagree with the war with Iraq.

Throughout the song, the artist, 4th25, consistently refers to Iraq as, “ the home of too many soldiers graves”. This line The line, “ Home of too many soldiers graves, Where for our country, We gamble with our lives everyday”, represents the artist’s feelings about the war. 4th25 believes the only result of the war so far is dead bodies and in result, low spirits. The lyrics to the song portrays the imagery from the battlefield well, from gun powder to the ubiquitous bombing. Another thing that bothers the artist is the fact that the soldiers gamble with their lives in Iraq and yet, if they survive they will never forget all the horrors from the war. Each second in Iraq is a chance the soldiers take and the artist depicts the terror of that gamble very clearly throughout the song.

After perusing the lyrics a couple of times, it is clear what the persona of the song is representing. The persona of the song is a soldier actively involved with the war and can identify with the soldiers who are fighting. All of the lines vividly describe the blood and gore of the war and how it affects the speaker. The speaker uses pathos to support the message he/she is trying to make. By involving intense imagery, the artist evokes emotion in the audience and therefore gets the audience involved in the event. Although the speaker is obvious, it is hard to know whether the artist is the persona or not. The artist could be involved with the event, however the connection between the two are unknown.

In order for the audience to understand the seriousness of the war with Iraq, the speaker includes visual facts about the recent events. The speaker uses imagery to persuade the audience to disagree with the war. Not only does the speaker disagree with the war, but he/she also wants the audience to know exactly what is going on in Iraq. The news does not give any of the gory details; therefore, someone must put the war into perspective. Many Americans are clueless as to what is going on and the speaker wants to give the audience the correct idea.

Throughout the song the artist makes references to the fighting occurring in Iraq. Through doing so, the song is more effective in introducing the message. The lyrics inform the audience about the war and gives strong evidence that the war is affecting the lives of many soldiers and their families. By including the line, “ 59 of us April 4th,8 of us dyin”, it evokes sympathy in the Americans who have no clue what is happening in Iraq. It also opens the idea that the war may not be worth the pain and suffering the soldiers and their families are experiencing. The song actually gives a reason for people to pay attention to the country and decide if the war is really the right decisions for the country. The main issue the speaker deals with is the effectiveness of the war. He/she wants know if the country is really making a difference by fighting this war.

In conclusion, Live From Iraq involves the issue with the war being effective or not. By fighting the war, soldiers are dying and loved ones are affected. According to the speaker, a soldier fighting in the war, the war is pointless. The speaker believes Americans should know the truth and not what is being said on the news. The war is still going on and nothing is being achieved so far. Since the speaker reveals the actual information regarding the war, Americans can decide for themselves if the war in Iraq is right or wrong.